Comments on: aaiinaa-e-khuloos-o-wafaa chuur ho gaye

By: Asma khan

Asma khan — Thu, 19 Aug 2010 14:44:42 +0000

ITS A NICE GAZAL IN SHORT HEART TOUCHING……..

By: W A Siddiqui

W A Siddiqui — Mon, 10 Dec 2007 08:42:42 +0000

Very good poetry.Hijrat ka gham bhi hai aur daure hazira ka karb bhi numayan hai.

By: H

Mon, 16 Apr 2007 09:42:31 +0000

dareechoN tak chale aaye tumhare daur ke khatre
ham apne ghar se baahar jhaankne ka hauslaa bhi kho baithe

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wo apne waqt ke nasshe mein khushiaN chhin le tujhse
magar jab tum hansee baantoN to usko bhool mat jaana

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apne har har lafz ka khud aaiinaa ho jaaoongaa
us ko chhota kah ke main kaise badaa ho jaaoongaa

tum giraane mein lage the tum ne sochaa hi nahiin
main giraa to maslaa ban kar khadaa ho jaaoongaa

mujh ko chlane do, akelaa hai abhi meraa safar
raastaa rokaa gayaa to qaafila ho jaaoongaa

saari duniya ki nazar mein hai meraa ahd-e-vafaa
ek tere kahne se kya main bevafaa ho jaaoongaa

By: Zaidi

Zaidi — Tue, 03 Oct 2006 20:20:39 +0000

Very ordinary.

By: Yasir

Yasir — Tue, 16 May 2006 07:58:21 +0000

One of the best gazal ever read on website.
good i cant explain.

Very finely explained the pain of peoples who migrated

By: meraj

meraj — Tue, 11 Apr 2006 03:29:50 +0000

hasile ghazal sher yeh hai
chara garon————nasur hogaye.
really superb!!!

By: rafiq khan

rafiq khan — Thu, 30 Mar 2006 18:51:02 +0000

i want to explain my opinion in urdu
ye aik bohat acha ghazal jo zindagee mein pehlee bal deknay ko mila hay bohat enjoy kia aur bohat ziada pasand aya i like it so much es ghazal nay mujay apna hal yad dilwaya jo mein nahein jantha tha

By: Harish

Harish — Wed, 01 Mar 2006 04:58:11 +0000

Hi. Nice ghazal.