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Nida Fazli wrote this nazm at the death of his father. He was not able to reach the burial because of some problems, and he paid his tribute to his father in this nazm.
tumhaarii qabr per
tumhaarii qabr par maiN
faatehaa paRhne nahiiN aayaa,
mujhe m’aaluum thaa, tum mar nahiiN sakte.
tumhaare maut kii sachchii Khabar
jisne uRaa’ii thii, wo jhuuTaa thaa,
wo tum kab the?
koiii suukhaa huaa pattaa, havaa meN gir ke TuuTaa thaa.
merii aaNkheN
tumhaare manzaroN meN qaid hai ab tak
maiN jo bhii dekhtaa huN, sochtaa huN
vo, vohii hai
jo tumhaarii nek-naamii aur bad-naamii ki duniyaa thii.
kahiiN kuch bhi nahiiN badlaa
tumhaare haath, merii uNgliyoN meN saaNs lete haiN
maiN likhne ke liye jab bhii, qalam kaaGaz uThaataa huN
tumhe baiThaa huvaa maiN
apnii hi kursii meN paataa huN,
badan meN mere, jitnaa bhi lahuu hai,
wo tumhaarii
laGzishoN, naa-kaamiyoN ke saath bahtaa hai,
merii aavaaz meN chhup kar, tumhaaraa zehn rehtaa hai,
meri biimaariyoN meN tum,
meri laa-chaariyoN meN tum
tumhaari qabr par jis ne tumhaaraa naam likhkhaa hai
wo jhuTaa hai,
tumhaari qabr meN, maiN dafn huN,
tum zindaa ho !
tum zindaa ho !
mile fursat kabhii, tau faatehaa paRhne chale aanaa.
Nida Fazli
Courtesy BGM sahab.
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awesome
gazab, mohabbat ka paimana hai ye gazal
Ghar se masjid hai badi door chalo yun kar le , kisi rote hue bachhe ko hasaya jai…
Truly Innocent
waqee bahut accha.aur bhi sher plz shamil karen
zindaa rehtey hai wo,
apney lahoo se
hamey banaatey hai jo,
jab jab bhi khabar,
kisi waalid key maut ki aayegi,
tab tab hi bolengey ashq ahsaas dil key,
zuban khamosh , bas khamosh
aur khamosh reh jaayegi.
Fazli sahab, aapkaa har lafz oonki(aapkey marhoom valid sahub ki) rooh ki izzat kar rahaa hai, aur ashq hi chhlak gaye tab, aap kehtey hai jab ki…..tum zindaa ho.tum zindaa ho…!!!
Smt.Renu Ahuja, from -http://www.kavyagagan.blogspot.com
Sir,
i lost my father few years ago.But truely speaking after i read your nazm, i feel that u have written everything i fealt in his absence and you have expressed my feelings i mean i feel whatever is written is true for me also.I shall remain greatful to you.
Thanks
Manish
Dear Mohib,
It would be great if you can share more gems from Nida Fazli Sahab
You are doing a great job. Thank you so much
Awesome! Nida fazili lets his readers in grasp and doesn’t let them do thill the last end..!
A masterpeice from Nida Fazili!
The stigma behind it is at pinnacle then what we can understand!!!!!!!!!
May God bless you Nida Fazili!!!!!
regards,
shahid!
Great, Nida Fazli,whenever writes his Kalam, he creates magic with his words.May Allah Bless you Nida Fazli Sahab.
teri shairi is tarah se meri zindagi mein shamil hai k lagta hai k dusra koi mugabil nahi hai.
ZINDAGI KUCH TO BATA
AAKHIR TUJHE KYA HO GAYA?
AAINA DHUNDLA GAYA YA
MERA CHEHRA KHOO GAYA?
Nida Sahab is simple yet amazing.
I am not familiar with Nida Fazli, but poetry of her definitely describes pain and grief she felt on her father’s death
Imran Zafar
http://www.urdumaza.com
This is so much nice n rich poetic place.
Tamaam Umr Guzaari Thhi Habss Me’n Laikin
Jala Chraagh To Rishta Hawa Se Jorr Liya
Abhi Khila Thha Meri Chashm e Namm Ki Tehni Per
Shugufta Khhwab Jisey Dast e Shab Ne Torr Liya
(Raees Qamar)
تمام عمر گذاری تھی حبس میں لیکن
جلا چراغ تو رشتہ ھوا سے جوڑ لیا
ابھی کھلا تھا میری چشم نم کی ٹہنی پر
شگفتہ خواب جسے دست شب نے توڑ لیا
رئیس قمر ۔ دست دعا پہ دل، سے
Karkey Ta’Raaj Mairi Hasti Ko
Mujh Mai’n A’baad Ho Gaya Koi
Raees Qamar
respected nida ji mere paas alfaz nahi hai apni bhawnaon kobayan kerne ke liye u r great
chehre ab muskaan khoye ja rahe hai
rishte nibhaye nahi dhoye ja rahe hai
daulat ke liye daman thaama gairo ka
aur apno ko yunhi khoye ja rahe hai
Nadan