abhii farmaan aayaa hai vahaaN se
ke haT jaauuN maiN apne darmiyaaN se
yahaaN jo hai tanaffus hii meN kam hai
parinde uR rahe haiN shaaKh-e-jaaN se
dariichaa baaz (?) hai yaadoN kaa aur maiN
havaa suntaa huN peRon ki zabaaN se
thaa ab tak m’arkaa baahaar kaa dar-pesh
abhii to ghar bhii jaanaa hai yahaaN se
falaaN se behtar thii Ghazal falaaN kii
falaaN ke zaKhm acche the falaaN se
Khabar kyaa duuN maiN shah’r-e-raftugaaN kii
ko’ii lauTe bhii shah’r-e-raftugaaN se
yahii anjaam kyaa tujh ko havas thaa
ko’ii puuche to meer-e-daastaaN se
Jaun Elia
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jaun is superb with his common language and magnficient use of his vocabulary.he was indeed a pakistani national but one can find live for his himrland india and specially his hometown amroha
jaun is superb with his common language and magnficient use of his vocabulary.he was indeed a pakistani national but one can find live for his himrland india and specially his hometown amroha
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jaun elia’s poetry has the indepth pain of losing something specially the deep pain after going away from his beloved home land. specially when he says
‘kya tumko main yaad nahi hoon ganga ji or jamuna ji , mai bhi tumhara hi sahil tha ganga ji or jamuna ji,patte bankar aisa bikhra waqt ki pagal andhi me, aaj mai apna sognashi hun ganga ji or jamuna ji.’
or when he say
gali ne hamari ya kah ke sabr kia , jaane wale yahan ke the hi nahi.