Comments on: pashemaanii http://aligarians.com/2006/04/pashemaanii/ Urdu Poetry - Ghazals, Nazms, Mushaira Fri, 22 Oct 2010 17:31:56 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Zohra http://aligarians.com/2006/04/pashemaanii/comment-page-1/#comment-30047 Zohra Wed, 14 Nov 2007 15:28:36 +0000 http://aligarians.com/2006/04/pashemaanii/#comment-30047 i really loved it, beautiful poetry awesome. i really loved it, beautiful poetry awesome.

]]> By: Ravi Kopra http://aligarians.com/2006/04/pashemaanii/comment-page-1/#comment-29971 Ravi Kopra Tue, 13 Nov 2007 06:44:26 +0000 http://aligarians.com/2006/04/pashemaanii/#comment-29971 I was getting ready to leave her thinking she'd make up with me and not let me go I took steps in such a way as if she would call me back and not let me go my shawl flitted in the winds she'd hold it I thought and not let me go but she didn't stop me did not make up with me nor did she call me I kept on going step by step so much that we're now fully on our own. I was getting ready
to leave her thinking
she’d make up with me
and not let me go

I took steps in such a way
as if she would call me
back and not let me go
my shawl flitted in the winds
she’d hold it I thought
and not let me go

but she didn’t stop me
did not make up with me
nor did she call me
I kept on going step
by step so much that
we’re now fully on our own.

]]> By: Dr.Pasha "the KING" Ahmer Rabbani http://aligarians.com/2006/04/pashemaanii/comment-page-1/#comment-573 Dr.Pasha "the KING" Ahmer Rabbani Sun, 07 May 2006 02:45:39 +0000 http://aligarians.com/2006/04/pashemaanii/#comment-573 i hate to admit the fact this is exactly what happened when i went to met someone after a long gap of separation breathtaking composition i hate to admit the fact this is exactly what happened when i went to met someone after a long gap of separation

breathtaking composition

]]> By: chandni http://aligarians.com/2006/04/pashemaanii/comment-page-1/#comment-494 chandni Sun, 30 Apr 2006 23:31:21 +0000 http://aligarians.com/2006/04/pashemaanii/#comment-494 this is so beautiful... this is so beautiful…

]]> By: Della Maharaj http://aligarians.com/2006/04/pashemaanii/comment-page-1/#comment-474 Della Maharaj Wed, 26 Apr 2006 22:08:59 +0000 http://aligarians.com/2006/04/pashemaanii/#comment-474 Your poetry is beautiful. Your poetry is beautiful.

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