Comments on: hamaare shauq kii ye intehaa thii

By: pinki

pinki — Fri, 22 Oct 2010 17:31:56 +0000

Jawed sahab is really great.aapki shayari gazab ki hai,i love it very much.

By: Seraj Ahmed

Seraj Ahmed — Thu, 01 Jul 2010 14:05:07 +0000

Nice…Bas iss se zyada kaha nahin ja sakta…
May I recieve this in AUDIO.

By: Prashant 9808538627

Prashant 9808538627 — Sun, 07 Feb 2010 09:13:46 +0000

can i get this gazal in audio or vedio
send me on my email id-prashantanjum@rediffmail.com

By: only shayyiri

only shayyiri — Sun, 28 Dec 2008 05:28:34 +0000

This is the best poem i have heard ever before…
each 2 lines of the poem contains a dirrerent story but the same feel…it is the best poem.

By: zakhm

zakhm — Wed, 01 Aug 2007 13:51:03 +0000

hamaare shauq kii ye intehaa thii
qadam rakhaa ke manzil raastaa thii

Kya baat hai. I hv no word to praise.

By: arif

arif — Sat, 28 Jul 2007 12:27:58 +0000

this is probably Javed sb’s best ever… amazingly beautiful

By: Behzad Parvez

Behzad Parvez — Wed, 21 Jun 2006 10:32:17 +0000

Very good ghazal Javed sahab.
Shortness and unstability of life is well defined
MeiN bachpan meN khilaune toRta tha
mere anjam ki vo ibtid’a thi
And of course life is a bitter pill; khoob kaha hai
……magar dunya baRi kaRvi davaa thi

By: Nadeem Khan

Nadeem Khan — Sat, 17 Jun 2006 17:27:41 +0000

Subhan Allha Kya kaha hai javed sahab ne

mariiz-e-Khvaab ko to ab shafaa hai
magar duniyaa baRii kaRvii davaa thii
Shahi mano me duniya ek kadvii davaa hai wahi jana hai ise jis ne ise chakha hai