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mujhe bujhaa de, meraa dard muKhtasar kar de
magar diye kii tarah mujh ko mo’atbar kar de
(muKhtasar : shorten; mo’atbar : trustworthy)
merii talaash ko be-naam-o-be-safar kar de
maiN teraa raastaa chhoRuuN to dar-ba-dar kar de
(be-naam-o-be-safar : without name and destination; dar-ba-dar : homeless)
judaaiiyoN kii ye raateN to kaaTnii hoNgii
kahaaniyoN ko ko’ii kaise muKhtasar kar de
tere Khayaal ke haathoN kuch aisaa bikhraa huuN
ke jaise bachaa kitaabeN idhar-udhar kar de
Waseem Barelvi
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Well I was one among those who heard waseem bahi reciting this poem in one of the mushayira…Simply it was outstanding..The art, the words used in this poem are out of ones sight and mind..Waseem Bahi keeps his listners in pace and dosent let them go till the last…
Regards and love to waseem bahi….
Raqim Shahid…
Dear Shahid Saheb,
Overwhelmed by your jesture, just a chance that i heard your contribution to internet covering a lot of people to listen to my peotry. Your genuine appreciation gives me alot of happiness and impetous.
regards
Waseem Barelvi
Salam,
It was a pleasure and suspense to check last night that you have posted a reply for me.Really i thought as if i was up there at pinnacle.It’s not only me who appriciates you for your literal work but its the whole Urdu nation who feels proud of having such a spritual poet sitting on the seat of ghazal empire.Really you are hope of many young ans aspiring people who have got inspiration from your goodself and who try to contribute anything to urdu adab by writting.I wish you a peaceful and prosperous life today and always.
Shahid Mir(Raqim Hyder)
Kashmir.
Execellent waseem sb.
i have no words to define yours every words thats u use in this poet.
As always waseem sahib’s poetry is well defined and well presented…His style of presentation is unique.
Certainly, Waseem Barelvi saheb is a living legend, and We are lucky that he is born in our country, India……LONG LIVE WASEEM BARELVI.
I am a Big Fan of Waseem Barelvi Sahab. I hurt a sher a sher which is Waseem sahab spoken in amroha ke….
“HADSON KI ZAD PE HAI TO MUSKURANA CHOR DE
ZALZALO KE KHAUF SE GHAR BANANA CHOR DE”
wah kaya poetry hai.
I am Big Fan of waseem barelvi Sahab. Really i thought as if i was up there at pinnacle
wah…….waseem bhai…….wah…………main to bareilly ka hi rahne wala hoon……..aur waseem bhai bareilly ki shaan hain…….!!
Salaam Wasim saab..
apki ek gazha suni thi barson pehle…uska ek she aaj tak zehen me hai…
mohabbat me zara si bewafai bhi zaruri hai…
wahi accha bhi lagta hai jo waade tod deta hai…
wish u a long life…
Mohabbat tumse hai yeh maanti hoon mein
chahat bus tumhari hai yeh janti hoon mein
Aao apni zaat ke us pehlu se milaaaon tumhe
mein kya hoon aur kon hoon yeh bataaon tumhe
Mein apni maan ki tarbiyat mein dhala ik sancha hoon
apne baba ki umeedon se pur aik khaka hoon mein
Apne bhai ki ghairat hoon yeh jaanti hoon mein
is ghar ki izat hoon yeh maanti hoon mein
To phir behek jaaon phir mein yeh mumkin hi nahin
rishte aur bhi to hain sirf tum hi to nahin
Mohbabbat unhe bhi hai sirf tum ko to nahin
Waseen Bhai Adab,
Aaap jo logon ko sher ki shakl mein apne qeemati lafzo ko saja kar NASIHAT bana dete hain, Bakhuda yeh salahiyat maine kisi aur mein nahin dekhi. Aapko ghazal aur Nazam padhte hue maine 11, March 1994 ko SIWAN – Bihar mein dekha tha, Ufff woh sadagi.
Allah apko lambi Umar de – AMin
Main to hoon KOLKATA ka, aapko barah e rast Siwan mein suna tha aur ab main SAUDI ARABIA mein hoon lekin apne dosto ke hujum mein ab bhi aapki Nazam ke kuchhh line bade hi shaan se padhta hooon.
Kabhi moka mile to mere liye do hurf likhiyega mere liye bahut hi fakhra ki baat hogi.
ALLAH HAFIZ
ASSALAMWALEKUM
JANAB WASEEM SAHIB
HUM AAPKO BAHUT PASAND KARTE HAIN AUR FIR AAPKA INTEZAR KARENGE KI KAB AAP HAMARE AMROHA AAYE AUR APNE NEK KHYALAATO AUR SHAYRI SE HAMARE AMROHA PER AUR HUM PER KUCH INAYAT KARE.
HUM AAPKO BAHUT YAAD KERTE HAIN
AUR AAPKI LAMBI UMAR AUR SEHAT KI DUA KERTE HAIN
HUM SACH KEH RAHEIN HAIN
” JHOOT KE AAGE PEECHE DARIYA CHALTE HAIN
SACH BOLAA TO PYAASAA MAARAA JAAYEGAA”
REGARDS
SIKANDER ALAM
Amazing peice of Shayari, Subhan Allah. Allah aapki umrdaraz kare (aameen), Allah ka karam hai hamein aapki shayari ka lutf mayassar hua, May this amazing shayari be cherished by generations to come……