Comments on: zindagii tanhaa safar kii raat hai

By: Kashif Hasan

Kashif Hasan — Mon, 19 Jul 2010 05:10:40 +0000

Can anybody send me this nazm of Jan nisar akhter starting with

“” may tujhe chahta nahi lekin
phir bhi jab to paas nahi hoti
teri auqat sochta hoon main
teri har baat sochta hoon main ——

Also, I have some excerpts of upcoming writer Shafiqzada’s romantic copy in urdu pdf, any interested to read and comment, i can share

rgds

KASHIF
UAE

By: jameel

jameel — Thu, 06 Aug 2009 17:05:23 +0000

please post these ghazals in urdu and in english.

By: rahman

rahman — Tue, 23 Jun 2009 12:33:20 +0000

To whom ever it may concern.
I have old recordings of Urdu poets such as Anwar Mirzapuri, Bekal, Kashif Indori and many more recorded live on spool tapes forty years back. If any one interested please contact meon my E mail. rahman_sma@hotmail.com

By: Mohib

Mohib — Tue, 29 Aug 2006 01:00:44 +0000

Really sorry, sometimes the mind refuses to work. Especially when you are pre-occupied with something else.

Thanks so much for pointing out the error. I have made the correction, it should be fine now.

By: stanvir

stanvir — Tue, 29 Aug 2006 00:08:01 +0000

saat and saath are parsed the same as far as ‘taqtee’ is concerned. However, correct me if I am wrong, but the first misra is still not in the same baihr as the rest of the ghazal.

By: Mohib

Mohib — Mon, 28 Aug 2006 23:41:07 +0000

My bad, the second line is:

ghaTte baRhte faasiloN kaa saat(h) hai

Can saat be written for saath?

By: stanvir

stanvir — Mon, 28 Aug 2006 23:11:15 +0000

Mohib sahib,

aakhri she’r is ghazal ka naheeN hai. baihr aur qaafiya donoN hi mukhtalif haiN.