Comments on: dono jahaaN terii muhabbat meN haar ke

By: ash

ash — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 10:15:09 +0000

yeah its good i agree bahaar

Ifkar Hussain — Thu, 17 Apr 2008 08:20:54 +0000

BEAUTIFUL
BEAUTIFUL

pilla — Tue, 08 Apr 2008 06:45:23 +0000

bahaar,

Agha Shahid Ali’s edition also shows jahaaN (nasalization) and “to diye”.

Cheers.

shaam — Sun, 09 Sep 2007 17:31:41 +0000

I really feel great when i see the shayri of Faiz here.

Mohib — Fri, 29 Dec 2006 12:00:30 +0000

shukriyaa bahaar saahab!

aapko bhii nayaa saal mubaarak ho.

Khaaksaar,
Mohib

bahaar — Fri, 29 Dec 2006 07:26:36 +0000

Salaam,
glad to see the recent updates.

couple of minor corrections for this lovely Faiz ghazal:

1. In the first sher, it is “jahaan”, not “jahaaN”.
The ending “n” sound is pronounced.

2. In the last sher, it is “muskuraa jo diye”, not “to diye”.

nayaa saal mubaarak ho!

bahaar