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Khataa maine ko’ii bhaarii nahiiN kii
amiir-e-shah’r se yaarii nahiiN kii
(amiir-e-shah’r : powerful people of the city)
kisii mansab kisii ohde kii khaatir
ko’ii tadbiir baazaarii nahiiN kii
(mansab : exalted position; ohde : position of influence; tadbiir : efforts)
bas itnii baat per duniyaa Khafaa hai
ke maine tujh se Ghaddaarii nahiiN kii
mirii baatoN meN kyaa taasiir hotii
kabhii maiN ne adaakaarii nahiiN kii
(taasiir : effect)
mire aiboN ko ginvaayaa to sab ne
kisii ne merii Gham-Khwaarii nahiiN kii
Tabish Mehdi
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Nice to c fresh and beautiful Ghazal after a long wait,i ve audio rendition of this ghazal .
merii baatoN meN kya taasiir hotii
kabhii maine adaakaarii nahiiN kii
suits me alot :wink.:
m`aamuuli correction, if O.K. with you
mirii baatoN meN kyaa taasiir hotii
kabhii maiN nee adaakaarii nahiiN kii
mie aiboN ko ginvaayaa to sab ne
kisii ne merii Gham-Khwaarii nahiiN kii
mirii baatoN meN kyaa taasiir hotii
kabhii maiN ne adaakaarii nahiiN kii
(taasiir : effect)
mire aiboN ko ginvaayaa to sab ne
kisii ne merii Gham-Khwaarii nahiiN kii
this is a good verse especially it suites the kind of person i am
mr. mehdi ko mubarakbad
bas isi baat se khfa hai duniya mujh se —kunki mene usse gaddari nahee ki————-its heartfelt lines—is truly suits to mi
thanks
Mr Mehdi,
Very beautifully written. Masha-Allah it is really very beautiful. I dont have words beyond that…
mire aiboN ko ginvaayaa to sab ne
kisii ne merii Gham-Khwaarii nahiiN kii
very touchy …………zafar
kisii mansab kisii ohde kii khaatir
ko’ii tadbiir baazaarii nahiiN kii
kia bath hai?
this is first time i am visting this website, its really great tribute to urdu poetry.
good poetry collection
Khata main koi bari nahi ki.
Koi tadbeer bazaari nahi ki.
I really like Tabish. He is really good poet.
Too Good , Masha Allah
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v.v.v.v nice
Tujh ko Khuda kaho ya tujh ka Sajda karo
Ek baar bata teray pyara ka paimana kia hai
Absolutely
FIRTLY I HAVE SEARCHED OUT THIS SITE AND I AM ADDICTED TO YOU ALL.
SALAAM
FOR ALL OF U
FROM ME
SOCHA NAHI THA K TERE KOOCHE PE
KYA KABHI AA BHI SAKUNGA
MGR AB YE SOCHTA HOON
KYA VAAPIS KABHI JAA BHI SAKUNGA
i dont have words to praise these magical lines
Unko to Namous Bhi,Izzat bhi,Pazeerai bhi
Muj Ko to Hasil nahi rone ko tanhai bhi
Apne hi hall pe hansna kabhi hans kay Rona
Main Bayak waqt tamasha bhi , tamashai bhi..
Thanks
Meri batton meiN kya taasiir hoti…., Tabish bhai such kaha hai, taasiir ke liye dunia mein sirf addakari chhahiye. Shukr hai yeh baat mohabbat par lagu nahi hoti, Kisi ne kaha hai
“Mohhabat kya hai taasiir-a-mohabbat kisko kahte hain,
Tera majboor kar dena, mera majboor ho jana.
very nice one…………..
I have No words funtastic……….
very nise oetry
excellent – keep it up such high quality of urdu poetry
better it should be in URDU – poetry of any language should be in its origin frame otherwise RASMUL KHUT of language will be vanished
thanks
Misbah uddin khan
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MOHAMMED MOIZUDDIN
CHICAGO- USA.
10/11/09
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slam!GUYS I M NEW 1 IN.i likd d poem written by tabish mehdi.i v similar name.my name is also tabish khan.so i9 m dedikating a ghazal written by another poet TABISH DHELVI to all of u.thanx.
DOST KYA KHOOB WAFAOON KA SILA DAITAY HAIN
HER IK MOOR PAY IK ZAKHM NEYA DAITAY HAIN.
KAISAY MMKIN HAI K DHUAAN B NA HO OR DIL B JALAY
AAG LAGTI HAI TO PATAY BI HAWAA DAITAY HAIN.
KON HOTA HAI MUSIBAT MAIN KISI KA AEY TABISH
WQT ANAY PAY APNAY BI DAGHAA DAITAY Hain.