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badan ke donoN kinaaroN se jal rahaa huuN maiN
ke chhuu rahaa huuN tujhe, aur pighal rahaa huuN maiN
tujhii pe Khatm hai jaanaaN mire zavaal kii raat
tuu ab tulu bhii ho jaa, ke Dhal rahaa huuN maiN
(zavaal : nadir; tulu : appearing)
bulaa rahaa hai miraa jaamaa-zeb milne ko
to aaj pairahan-e-jaaN badal rahaa huuN maiN
(jaamaa-zeb : ?; pairahan-e-jaaN : clothes of the soul)
Ghubaar-e-rahguzar kaa ye hauslaa bhii to dekh
havaa-e-taazaa! tire saath chal rahaa huuN maiN
(Ghubaar-e-rahguzar : dust of the path; havaa-e-taazaa : fresh breeze)
maiN Khvaab dekh rahaa huuN ke vo pukaartaa hai,
aur apne jism se baahar nikal rahaa huuN maiN
Irfan Siddiqui
Courtesy: Zoya
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Its Beautiful!
bulaa rahaa hai miraa jaamaa-zeb milne ko
to aaj pairahan-e-jaaN badal rahaa huuN maiN
(jaamaa-zeb : ?; pairahan-e-jaaN : clothes of the soul)
I guess, these(jamaa,zeb) are two separate words.
beautiful thoughts, but half of the taste was spoiled just by not seeing it printed in lovely urdu script.
very nice..
wo alag baat hai ki..urdu ke words ne thhoda sa spoil kiya..but excellent..
Thanx for sharing..
agar achhi ghazals share karna chahein..to email haazir hai..
chandni.here@yahoo.com
The couplet reveals the secret when two bodies are being ready to mingle and to become one soul.
bulaa rahaa hai miraa jaamaa-zeb milne ko
to aaj pairahan-e-jaaN badal rahaa huuN maiN
(jaamaa-zeb : ?; pairahan-e-jaaN : clothes of the soul)
Jaamaa-e-zaib: Worn Clothes
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Yes , Very very nice poetry.
Badan kay donoon kinaroon se jal raha hoon main
great.
I never heard about Irfan Siddiqui’s Poetry. But when i read it today, i am impressed.
very very nice inclusion.
Thank You.
it’s very nice.
bahut achchi hai.
abhi zyada kuch kah nahi sakta naya hu but waaqai me achcha hai.
MMK
bahut khoob likha hai likhna wale ne.kisi ne khoob kaha hai
woh jo bolen to unke kahe har lafz se khushboo aye,
aisi boli lole to wahi bole jise urdu aye!
bahut khoob likha hai likhna wale ne.kisi ne khoob kaha hai
woh jo bolen to unke kahe har lafz se khushboo aye,
aisi boli bole to wahi bole jise urdu aye!
maiN Khvaab dekh rahaa huuN ke vo pukaartaa hai,
aur apne jism se baahar nikal rahaa huuN maiN
wahhhhhhh….bahut khuub
why no updates??
salam,
everyone share its own thoughts but i,m against tbose who r criticising because when u criticise, u should atleast hold ur nerve before, r u having ability.well i really appriciate that person who gave this kind of great ghazal.u know it put ample effect on me, it touchs my soul, well here i want to share one thing thats to convert urdu into romanize its great task for the person to deliver it correctly.
Nida Fazli is best ghazalist .i like his poetry very much.My motto is to meet him to share him my poetic feeling in my life.because iam also nepali ghazalist. emphatic and hearttouching he always writes.
Amazing , Wonderful , Marvelous.
I love urdu so much
Good Work Guys
Bahut Khobsurat hai ,
ab iss k elawa main kiya keh sakti hoon ?
Nice !
I am happy to read all the comments. you are doing marvelous job
TO GOOD
kia khoob ghazal kahi hai…
kash irfan sahab samney hotey to hum “muqarra” kehtey chaley jatey aur is ghazal pe sur dhuntey chaley jatey…
“chhoo raha hoon tujhey aur pighal raha hoon main”
“to aaj pairhan-e-jaan badal raha hoon main”
“ghubar-e-rahguzar ka yeh hosla bhi to daikh”
“aur apney jism se bahar nikal raha hoon main…”
hur aik raishmi khayal kia khoob buna hai, itni khoobsurat ghazal ne phir “urdu rusm-ul-khat” ki yaad dila di, kash issey urdu main piroya huwa daikhtey…
bahot khoob ye gazal is baat ki gawahi deti hai ke guzarte daur me bhi urdu zabaan ke alam ko sambhalne keliye(IRFAN SAHAB)jaise shohra-e-keraam maujood hai….taweel umrak insha allah…
Beautiful…..written in english but still awesome…..even its better if you publish ghazals and nazms in englih so that people who do nt know urdu,can read and feel the warmth and beauti of such a sweet and soul blowing language called URDU…
well,i can only say one thing about this ghazal;Amazing , Wonderful and awesome….i dnt have word to explain…….
i want to congratulate to the whole team of this website fr presenting and serving URDU…..KEEP IT UP.
salam,
kash Irfan Bhai ap saamney hotey toh bas aapko sunta rehta aapkii gazal mein humney woh dard mahsoos kiya hai jo hona chahiye thanks Bhai jaan,agar aur bhi acchie gazal ho toh mujhe mail karey plz.sahil_alld987@yahoo.co.in
Behad khoobsurat ghazal. Ehsas ko alfaz mein kaise dhala ja sakta hai, yeh uski ek misal hai.subhhan allah !
….Ab apne jism se bahar nikal raha hoon maiN. Khoobsoorat ehsaas aur behad buland khayal ! Subahn allah…
Wah, Great. Very nice. I like it.
Congrets.
Jalal Mastan ‘Jalal’
(Gujarati Ghazal Writer, Ahmedabad)
its veryyy nice.i like it.you are working very good job,keep going on
Esxcellent,
Bahut khoobsurat hai…
javed.a.khan@in.abb.com
it is a very written ghazal.
jaama-e- zeb alludes to a person who can carry on his person any type of dress with grace and aplomb
bohot hi roomaani ghazal…parhkar acha laga..:)
thnks
IMHO jamaaa-zeb would mean “woh jamaa(clothes) jo badan ko zeb de” meaning cothes that would look proper/good on the body.Going by the mood of this composition, it seems he is referring to Shroud(kafan)
VERY BEAUTIFUL GAZAL , I LOVED IT. KEEP IT ON.
great expression of precious feelings
Yaar Its amazing really very nice Ghazal
hamari ye virasat lazmi tum tak bhi poh.N.chegi,,,ham apne bad marne ke yahan diwan chhode.N.ge…..composed by Tariq zia khan
bohat khub……yr shairi parh ke ab tak jal raha hun main….
its very nice ghazal.its touch to heart.
Kya khoob shabd hai .. shayari padhte hue tasveerein ban rahi thi dimaag mein ..
subhaan allah .. par haan devnagri script nahi hone se aadha reh gay amazaa
bahut khoobsurat ghazal hai …………
mujhe lag raha hai ke is ko padhne ke baad
main bhi badan k dono kinaron se jal raha hoon..
Assalam,
Great one!!!
Can I have more ghazals on this site. I think This site has not been updated since long time.
Rgds
Mustaque
PLEASE UPDATE THIS SITE,AND PUT SOME MORE GHAZALS, MAZZAHIA(NAZIR KHAYAMI LUCKNOW) IF U CAN.THANKS.
Ghubaar-e-rahguzar kaa ye hauslaa bhii to dekh
havaa-e-taazaa! tire saath chal rahaa huuN maiN
kya khoob hai, andaz achhota our bemisal.
salam .nice poetry bez it touch my herat
irfan sb ne aik shahkaar tehleeq kia hai. is ghazal ki tareef karne k liye mere pass jo lafz hain wo bhot chote hain. sirf itna keh sakta hun k well done keep it up
behat umda qism ki shayri hai , i m impressed , realy very good ..
From Karachi, Pakistan
wah, wah, subhaan allah .. zor e bayaa’n aur zyaada Irfan Sahab…
subhan ALLAH
THA GHAM-E-ISHQ DAUDTA THA RAG-E-JAAn MEn TERI
AB ASSHK BAN KE ANKHon SE NIKAL RAHA HUnMAIn
very Nice. first two lines are beautiful.
NICE G