kab uskaa visaal chaahiye thaa

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kab uskaa visaal chaahiye thaa
bas aik Khayaal chaahiye thaa

(visaal : meeting)

kab dil ko javaab se Gharz thii
hoNToN ko savaal chaahiye thaa

shauq ek nafas thaa aur vafaa ko
paas-e-maah-o-saal chaahiye thaa

(nafas : moment; maah-o-saal : months and years)

ek chehraa-e-saadaa thaa jo hamko
be-misl-o-misaal chaahiye thaa

(be-misl-o-misaal : incomparable)

ek qarb meN zaat-o-zindagii haiN
mumkin ko muhaal chaahiye thaa

Jaun Elia

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UrooJ May 2, 2008 at 12:10 am

Indeed a fantabulous choice of poetry,reminded me of one of his piece of writing

woh mera khayaal thii so woh thii
main uska khaYaal thaa so main thaa
ab dono khaYaal mar chuke hain !

Thanks :)

Sana May 3, 2008 at 2:58 pm

After sooo long a new post!! Thank you soo much for these gorgeous verses! kab uskaa visaal chaahiye thaa.. bas aik Khayaal chaahiye thaa! So true…!

raftaar May 5, 2008 at 8:31 pm

वाह! वाह! पर याद आया..

वो फ़िराक़ और वो विसाल कहाँ….

madhukar September 8, 2009 at 9:16 pm

mere jajbaat mere haalat tumhe kya maaloom,
kaise katti hai maine raat tumhe kya maloom.

mere tanhai pe ilzaam lagane valo ,
mere bigde hue haalaat tumhe kya maloom.

mere sapno ka hasee tajmahal toot gaya ,
kitne jzkhmi hai khayalat tumhe kya maloom.

Syed Muslim Abbas September 8, 2009 at 11:25 pm

A wonderfull piece of ghazal.It reminds me some part of my past life.

aamir September 12, 2009 at 9:13 pm

hai

Mohammad Motiur rahman September 23, 2009 at 1:11 am

Teri Mohababat yad aati hai hamko
Teri wafayen satati hai hamko
Kyon chhodkar hame ajnabi ho gaye
Din rat teri yad tadpati hai hamko
Tere jane ka asar hua Kuchh iss tarah
Ab har khushi rulati hai hamko
Suna hai hal tumhara bhi bura hai juda hokar hamse
Yah raj teri sakhiyan batati hai hamko
Iss jamane ne kya hal kar diya tumhara
Kya ye duniya tadpane ki saja deti hai hamko
Pyar main yahi hal hota hai aksar ‘Dost’
Aati jati fija yahi kahti hai hamko.

Shagir Hussain October 1, 2009 at 12:54 am

A wonderfull ghazal.It reminds me part of my life.

mehertab October 14, 2009 at 4:20 am

ik Misraa hai Zendagi meri ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,aap chahain to shair ho jai

ASAD BILAL October 28, 2009 at 11:07 pm

i have no words ……………………………. its amazing

mubeen October 31, 2009 at 2:24 am

a sign of beautiful gazal is simple language i think it is there

Ahmad Ali Khan November 10, 2009 at 10:20 am

Umer guzre gi imtihaan mai kya?
Daag hi mile gay mujhe daan mai kya?

Kyun bolte nahi mere haq mai,
Ablay par gay zuban mai kya?

Meri her baat bay-asar hi rahi,
Nuks hai kuch mere biyaan mai kya?

Kyun dekhta rehta hai asmaan ki taraf,
Koi rehta bhi hai asmaan mai kya?

ye mujhe chain kyun anhi parta,
Ek hi shaks tha jahaan mai kya.

Jaun Elia

Ahmad Ali Khan November 10, 2009 at 10:21 am

YARO KUCH TO ZIKR KARO TUM USKI QAYAAMAT BAANHON KA
WO JO SIMAT’TAY HONGE UN MEIN WO TO MARJATE HONGE

Ahmad Ali Khan November 10, 2009 at 10:22 am

tum haqiqat nahi ho hasrat ho,
jo miley khwaab main vo daulat ho.

main tumharey hi dum sey zindaa hoon,
mar hi jaoun jo tumsey fursat ho.

tum ho kushboo key khwaab ki khushbu,
aur itnee hi be-murawat ho.

kis tarah choodh dun tumhey jaana,
tum meri zindagi ki aadat ho.

kis liyen daikhti hoo aainaa,
tum tou khud sey bhi khobsurat ho.

dastaan khatm honey waali hai,
tum meri aakhri mohabbat ho.

Ahmad Ali Khan November 10, 2009 at 10:28 am

woh apne aap se bhi judaa chaahiye mujhe
us kaa jamaal us ke sivaa chaahiye mujhe

har lamha ji rahe hain davaa ke baGhair ham
chaaraagaroN tumhaarii du’aa chaahiye hameN

phir dekhiye jo harf bhii nikle zabaan seek din
jo puuch baithe ke kyaa chaahiye hamen

jaanaa nahiiN hai ghar se nikal kar kahiiN magar
har maah-ruu ke ghar kaa pataa chaahiye hameN

muddat se ham kisii ko nahiiN de sake fareb
ai shah’r-e-iltifaat wafaa chaahiye hameN

har aan aakhrii hai magar us ke baa-vajuud
is aan bhii yaqiin-e-fanaa chaahiye hameN
John

Ahmad Ali Khan November 10, 2009 at 10:30 am

Dil Main Jin ka Nishan be na Raha
Kyun Na Chehron Pe Ab wo rung Kilain
Ab Tho khali hai, Rooh Jazbon Se
Ab be kia Hum Thappak se na Milain

Ahmad Ali Khan November 10, 2009 at 11:12 am

Unhain Main Teri Tamanna ka fun Sikhata Hun
Jo Log Teri Tamanna Se Darnay lagte Hain

Saad December 2, 2009 at 10:30 am

Sharm, dehshat, jhijhak, pareshani
naaz se kaam kyun nahi leti

Aap, jii, wo, magar, ye sab kya hai
tum mera naam kyun nahi leti

saira hamza December 2, 2009 at 9:47 pm

hi, gazal achi hai keep it up………
take good care of ur self….
bye…………
GOD BLESS U…………..

aleesha December 10, 2009 at 10:25 pm

its a very nice KAB USKA VISAAL CHAAHIYE THAA ,it shows the great sincerity of emotions for someone…….

hyshona May 4, 2010 at 1:35 am

hmm…. beautiiiful

Ruby August 6, 2010 at 5:38 am

wah g wah boht achy

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