kab uskaa visaal chaahiye thaa
bas aik Khayaal chaahiye thaa
(visaal : meeting)
kab dil ko javaab se Gharz thii
hoNToN ko savaal chaahiye thaa
shauq ek nafas thaa aur vafaa ko
paas-e-maah-o-saal chaahiye thaa
(nafas : moment; maah-o-saal : months and years)
ek chehraa-e-saadaa thaa jo hamko
be-misl-o-misaal chaahiye thaa
(be-misl-o-misaal : incomparable)
ek qarb meN zaat-o-zindagii haiN
mumkin ko muhaal chaahiye thaa
Jaun Elia
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Indeed a fantabulous choice of poetry,reminded me of one of his piece of writing
woh mera khayaal thii so woh thii
main uska khaYaal thaa so main thaa
ab dono khaYaal mar chuke hain !
Thanks
After sooo long a new post!! Thank you soo much for these gorgeous verses! kab uskaa visaal chaahiye thaa.. bas aik Khayaal chaahiye thaa! So true…!
वाह! वाह! पर याद आया..
वो फ़िराक़ और वो विसाल कहाँ….
mere jajbaat mere haalat tumhe kya maaloom,
kaise katti hai maine raat tumhe kya maloom.
mere tanhai pe ilzaam lagane valo ,
mere bigde hue haalaat tumhe kya maloom.
mere sapno ka hasee tajmahal toot gaya ,
kitne jzkhmi hai khayalat tumhe kya maloom.
A wonderfull piece of ghazal.It reminds me some part of my past life.
hai
Teri Mohababat yad aati hai hamko
Teri wafayen satati hai hamko
Kyon chhodkar hame ajnabi ho gaye
Din rat teri yad tadpati hai hamko
Tere jane ka asar hua Kuchh iss tarah
Ab har khushi rulati hai hamko
Suna hai hal tumhara bhi bura hai juda hokar hamse
Yah raj teri sakhiyan batati hai hamko
Iss jamane ne kya hal kar diya tumhara
Kya ye duniya tadpane ki saja deti hai hamko
Pyar main yahi hal hota hai aksar ‘Dost’
Aati jati fija yahi kahti hai hamko.
A wonderfull ghazal.It reminds me part of my life.
ik Misraa hai Zendagi meri ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,aap chahain to shair ho jai
i have no words ……………………………. its amazing
a sign of beautiful gazal is simple language i think it is there
Umer guzre gi imtihaan mai kya?
Daag hi mile gay mujhe daan mai kya?
Kyun bolte nahi mere haq mai,
Ablay par gay zuban mai kya?
Meri her baat bay-asar hi rahi,
Nuks hai kuch mere biyaan mai kya?
Kyun dekhta rehta hai asmaan ki taraf,
Koi rehta bhi hai asmaan mai kya?
ye mujhe chain kyun anhi parta,
Ek hi shaks tha jahaan mai kya.
Jaun Elia
YARO KUCH TO ZIKR KARO TUM USKI QAYAAMAT BAANHON KA
WO JO SIMAT’TAY HONGE UN MEIN WO TO MARJATE HONGE
tum haqiqat nahi ho hasrat ho,
jo miley khwaab main vo daulat ho.
main tumharey hi dum sey zindaa hoon,
mar hi jaoun jo tumsey fursat ho.
tum ho kushboo key khwaab ki khushbu,
aur itnee hi be-murawat ho.
kis tarah choodh dun tumhey jaana,
tum meri zindagi ki aadat ho.
kis liyen daikhti hoo aainaa,
tum tou khud sey bhi khobsurat ho.
dastaan khatm honey waali hai,
tum meri aakhri mohabbat ho.
woh apne aap se bhi judaa chaahiye mujhe
us kaa jamaal us ke sivaa chaahiye mujhe
har lamha ji rahe hain davaa ke baGhair ham
chaaraagaroN tumhaarii du’aa chaahiye hameN
phir dekhiye jo harf bhii nikle zabaan seek din
jo puuch baithe ke kyaa chaahiye hamen
jaanaa nahiiN hai ghar se nikal kar kahiiN magar
har maah-ruu ke ghar kaa pataa chaahiye hameN
muddat se ham kisii ko nahiiN de sake fareb
ai shah’r-e-iltifaat wafaa chaahiye hameN
har aan aakhrii hai magar us ke baa-vajuud
is aan bhii yaqiin-e-fanaa chaahiye hameN
John
Dil Main Jin ka Nishan be na Raha
Kyun Na Chehron Pe Ab wo rung Kilain
Ab Tho khali hai, Rooh Jazbon Se
Ab be kia Hum Thappak se na Milain
Unhain Main Teri Tamanna ka fun Sikhata Hun
Jo Log Teri Tamanna Se Darnay lagte Hain
Sharm, dehshat, jhijhak, pareshani
naaz se kaam kyun nahi leti
Aap, jii, wo, magar, ye sab kya hai
tum mera naam kyun nahi leti
hi, gazal achi hai keep it up………
take good care of ur self….
bye…………
GOD BLESS U…………..
its a very nice KAB USKA VISAAL CHAAHIYE THAA ,it shows the great sincerity of emotions for someone…….
hmm…. beautiiiful
wah g wah boht achy