ek hunar hai jo kar gayaa huuN maiN
sab ke dil se utar gayaa huuN maiN
(hunar : skill)
kaise apnii haNsii ko zabt karuuN
sun rahaa huuN ke ghar gayaa huuN maiN
(zabt : control)
kyaa bataauuN ke mar nahiiN paataa
jiite ji jab se mar gayaa huuN maiN
ab hai bus apna saamnaa darpesh
har kisii se guzar gayaa huuN maiN
(darpesh : to confront)
voh hii naaz-o-adaa, voh hii Ghamze
sar-ba-sar aap par gayaa huuN maiN
(naaz-o-adaa : playfulness; Ghamze : amorous glances; sar-ba-sar : from top to bottom)
ajab ilzaam huuN zamaane kaa
ke yahaaN sab ke sar gayaa huuN maiN
kabhii Khud tak pahunch nahiiN paayaa
jab keh vaaN umr bhar gayaa huuN maiN
tum se jaanaaN milaa huuN jis din se
be-tarah, Khud se dar gayaa huuN maiN
kuu–e–jaanaaN meN sog barpaa hai
ke achaanak, sudhar gayaa huuN maiN
(kuu–e–jaanaaN : house of the beloved)
Ghazal by Jaun Elia
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very good
very good, i like it
bht khub. pata lagta hai ke john aelia ka hi kalaam hai
has somebody already his new book GOYA ?
ek ghairao pan hai es ghazal mein….lage raho………
Very Beautiful Ghazal,,,,,,,
its so nice……
kuu–e–jaanaaN meN sog barpaa hai
ke achaanak, sudhar gayaa huuN maiN
wah buhat khoob
Awesome is the word!!!! I just loved every sher -
Amazing !
Cheers
who else then Joan shaab could write such a fine yoke …
“ab hai bus apna saamnaa darpesh
har kisii se guzar gayaa huuN maiN”
That could well be a worthy compliment to his own poetic self…
very best of the best
this is not related to this particular post, but thought to draw your attendtion to this :
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I got this message when I tried to look for list of gazals by Singers.
Mein tumharay aks ki aarzoo mein bass aaiyna hi bani rahi
Kabhi tum na samnay aa sakay, kabhi mugh pay gard pari rahi
Woh ajeeb saam thi,aaj tak meray dil mein uss ka malal hai
Meri tarh jo teri muntazir teray rastay mein khari rahi
Kabhi waqf-e-hijr main ho gaei,kabhi khwab-e-wasl mein kho gaei
Main faqeer-e-ishq bani rahi,main aseer-e-yaad huwi rahi
Huwi uss say jab meri baat bhi,thi shareek-e-dard woh zaat bhi
To najanay kon si cheez ki meri zindagi mein kami rahi
by Samina Raja
meray jane-e-jahan meray hum safar
koi baat kar koi baat kar
tery lab hassay to safar katy
koi baat kar koi baat kar
koi boj ha tu utar da
koi khof ha tu nkaal da
mery hum safar baat kar koi baat kar
nahi yaad katny bars gay
teri gufto goo ko ters gay
koi baat kar
koi baat kar
mazhar
Dont have words and dont have courage to praise sth like this. Its just woderful. After whole day of work, when i read this, i felt like i have just got up early in the morning, and have offered Fajr and sitting with a cup of tea infront of my……
Grate
SUBAH-E-AZADI
AUGAST 47
yeh daag daag ujala,yeh shab guzida sehar,
wo intezar tha jis ka,yeh wo sehar to nai,
yeh wo sehar to nai,jis ki arzoo lekar,
chale te yaar ke mil jaye gi kai na kai,
falak ke dasht mai taaro ka akri manzil,
kai to hoga shab-e-sust moj ka sahil,
kai to jake ruke ga safina-e-gham dil,
jawan lahoo ki pur’israr sharahon se,
chale jo yar to daman pe kitne haat pare,
dayar-e-husan ki be-sabar khawab gao se,
pukarti rai baahen, badan bulate rahe,
baut aziz ti lakin rukh-e-sehar ki lagan,
baut qarin ta hasinan e noor ka daman,
subak subak ti tamanna,dabbi dabbi ti thakan,
suna hai ho bi chuka hai firaq-e-zulmat o noor,
suna hai ho bi shuka hai wisal-e-manzil o gaam,
badal chuka hai baut ail-e-dard ka dastoor,
nishat-e-wasal halal ho azab-e-hijar haram,
jigar ki aag,nazar ki umang,dil ki jalan,
kisi pe chara-e-hijran ka kuch asar hi nai,
kaha se ayi nigar-e-saba,kidar ko gai,
abi charg-e-sar e rah ko kuch kabar hi nai,
abi girani-e-shab mai kaami ayi nai,
nijad deeda o dil gari nai ayi,
chale chalo ke wo manzil abi nai ayi,
rehmat
Please visit my Urdu ghazal blog, Khahish-E Sang, @ khahish-esang.blogspot.com and English ghazal blog, The Tree of Voice, @ thetreeofvoice.blogspot.com.
زندگی میں جب تم کو کوئی راستہ دکھائی نہ دے
کوئی منزل دکھائی نہ دے
کوئی اپنا دکھائی نہ دے
کوئی پیار کرنے والا دکھائی نہ دے
اور
جب یہ دیس سُونا سُونا لاگے رے
تو میرے پاس چلے آنا میں تمھیں
آئی اسپیشلسٹ
کے پاس لے چلوں گی
بولو
آؤ گے نا۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔؟
انتخاب: کرن خان۔ مردان
Aap ki chahat ankhun se ayaa huti hai
kabhi haq jatati hai tu kabhi ansu bhati hai
adab……….
Wonderful lines. Loved ‘em.
अब वो औरों की ज़ुबां का भी असर देखते हैं,
बात आई है जो उन पर तो इधर देखते हैं |
मेरे मरने की दुआ मांगने वाले अक्सर,
अपने छज्जों पे क़यामत के भंवर देखते हैं |
ख्वार खस्ता मेरा घर देखने वाले देखे ,
गौर से देखने वाले तो जिगर देखते हैं |
अपने आँगन सजा नहीं सके जो दीवाने ,
मेरे कलाम के शादाब शजर देखते हैं |
मेरी कलम का लिखा , मेरे जेहन के गुंचे ,
मेरे अरमान , मेरे ग़म , लोग हुनर देखते हैं |
सुन के भी अनसुना करते थे हमारी जो कभी ,
वो अब वारिद मेरी बातों की लहर देखते हैं |
i’ve written these verses at the age of 15 without any help n cheating i need your true comments,if someone dose’nt likes just say it straight forwardly!
”milay hain kai humsafar zindgani mein,
nahi yaad kisay kahan chor aaye…
nahi maoloom jahan kaun apna kaun baigana hai,
hum wo sheher wo nagar chor aaye…
dil mein hasraton ki jo immarat thi,
mudat hoi mariam usay chor aaye…
us k ik ik lafz ne dil py aisay teer chalaye,
samait na sakay hum dil ka har zar’ra wahin chor aaye…
looking forward for ur comments…!
very nice
i want to send you my poetry for correction .
May i send u
inki shayari se mai jaroor sudhar gaya huN.
hi i like ur poems
Nice Collection…………! I would like to add some more kalaams, written by my uncle Jafar Raza in his Book ‘Doosraa Main..’!
1) Agarche khud pe ronaa chahiye tha,
Bahaanaa kuchh to honaa chahiye tha |
Saleeqaa seekh lete khelne kaa,
Agar dil kaa khilaunaa chahiye thaa |
* * *
2) Kisase aas lagaaye kaun,
Jaanke dhokhaa khaaye kaun|
Dil to dil tha toot gayaa,
Chhodo bhi pachhtaaye kaun|
* * *
3) Aainaa jab bhi dekhtaa hoon main,
Aisaa lagataa hai doosaraa hoon main|
Jab se rusvaaiyon ne moonh modaa,
Kitnaa tanhaa saa reh gayaa hoon main|
Chand khushiyaan khareedane ke liye,
Ai “Raza” umra bhar bikaa hoon main|
I believe it, like ur poetry too..
Mai ja raha tha apni hi dhun me,
Apni manzil ko pane ki lalak thi mujhme,
Hazar nigahon se mili meri nazar,
ek nazar thi jo mujhe khamosh lagi,
Us nigaah me esa kya tha jo chupa tha,
Chahta tha ye raaz aafshan ho jaye,
Mera dil kahe chale chalo,
Ye zameer kahe yahi ruko,
Mene dil k aage sirf zameer ki suna,
Hazar nigahon me us ek ko chuna,
Un nigahoon me mene jab jhanka,
Door door tak sehra-o-veeraniyan ho,
Yu laga ye nigahen Taras gayee thi ab tak,
Jese pooche ki tum kahan the ab tak…….!!
Aadàb..
Truely saying its Superb.,
Really u did great job in very young age.
May Almighty provide Good & Soothing thoughts to You that u express it on Paper which imprints in others mind.
Best Wishes..
Tc
maraim kya baat hai allah aapko aur ilemm de
very very nice i love it…<3
Superb one..Specially the last line….saying the things and then saying……”sudhar gya hoon main”
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