Comments on: ek hunar hai jo kar gayaa huuN maiN

By: ABHISHEK JHA

ABHISHEK JHA — Wed, 13 Oct 2010 11:48:10 +0000

Superb one..Specially the last line….saying the things and then saying……”sudhar gya hoon main”

By: zaini baba

zaini baba — Sat, 24 Jul 2010 21:48:33 +0000

very very nice i love it…<3

By: arsh

arsh — Sun, 28 Mar 2010 07:19:57 +0000

maraim kya baat hai allah aapko aur ilemm de

By: Kabir Khan

Kabir Khan — Sun, 21 Mar 2010 18:37:36 +0000

Aadàb..
Truely saying its Superb.,
Really u did great job in very young age.
May Almighty provide Good & Soothing thoughts to You that u express it on Paper which imprints in others mind.
Best Wishes..
Tc

By: Talha

Talha — Thu, 25 Feb 2010 09:59:44 +0000

Mai ja raha tha apni hi dhun me,
Apni manzil ko pane ki lalak thi mujhme,
Hazar nigahon se mili meri nazar,
ek nazar thi jo mujhe khamosh lagi,
Us nigaah me esa kya tha jo chupa tha,
Chahta tha ye raaz aafshan ho jaye,
Mera dil kahe chale chalo,
Ye zameer kahe yahi ruko,
Mene dil k aage sirf zameer ki suna,
Hazar nigahon me us ek ko chuna,
Un nigahoon me mene jab jhanka,
Door door tak sehra-o-veeraniyan ho,
Yu laga ye nigahen Taras gayee thi ab tak,
Jese pooche ki tum kahan the ab tak…….!!

By: Talha

Talha — Thu, 25 Feb 2010 09:54:26 +0000

I believe it, like ur poetry too..

By: Gatha

Gatha — Sun, 03 Jan 2010 08:06:41 +0000

Nice Collection…………! I would like to add some more kalaams, written by my uncle Jafar Raza in his Book ‘Doosraa Main..’!
1) Agarche khud pe ronaa chahiye tha,
Bahaanaa kuchh to honaa chahiye tha |
Saleeqaa seekh lete khelne kaa,
Agar dil kaa khilaunaa chahiye thaa |
* * *
2) Kisase aas lagaaye kaun,
Jaanke dhokhaa khaaye kaun|
Dil to dil tha toot gayaa,
Chhodo bhi pachhtaaye kaun|
* * *
3) Aainaa jab bhi dekhtaa hoon main,
Aisaa lagataa hai doosaraa hoon main|
Jab se rusvaaiyon ne moonh modaa,
Kitnaa tanhaa saa reh gayaa hoon main|
Chand khushiyaan khareedane ke liye,
Ai “Raza” umra bhar bikaa hoon main|

By: saira saira

saira saira — Tue, 22 Dec 2009 10:41:19 +0000

hi i like ur poems

By: nishant ranjan

nishant ranjan — Tue, 10 Nov 2009 07:57:45 +0000

inki shayari se mai jaroor sudhar gaya huN.

By: Sajjad Soz

Sajjad Soz — Fri, 23 Oct 2009 06:07:09 +0000

very nice
i want to send you my poetry for correction .
May i send u