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maskan-e-maah-o-saal chhoR gayaa
dil ko us kaa Khayaal chhoR gayaa
(maskan : abode; maah-o-saal : months and years)
taazah-dam jism-o-jaaN the furqat meN
vasl us kaa nidhaal chhoR gayaa
(taazah-dam : fresh; jism-o-jaaN : body and soul; furqat : separation; vasl : meeting; nidhaal : exhausted)
ahd-e-maazii jo thaa ajab purhaal
aik viiraan haal chhoR gayaa
(ahd-e-maazii : time of past; purhaal : eventful)
zaala-baarii ke marhaloN kaa safar
qaafile, paayemaal chhoR gayaa
(zaala-baarii : hailstorm; marhale : stages; paayemaal : devastated)
dil ko ab ye bhii yaad ho ke na ho
kaun thaa , kyaa malaal chhoR gayaa
maiN bhii ab Khud se huuN javaab-talab
vo mujhe be-savaal chhoR gayaa
Jaun Elia
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Hey good to see blog back in action!
meaning of nidhaal: exhausted
meaning of zaala-baarii: hailstorm
Farrukh:
Thank you!
jaun elia itni dra deny wali verses q lkhty??
maumly k sangeeny bht zaida dikhaye dete inn k poetry parh kr:)
bt its different n good..
happy to c mail 4rm aligarianz back.
subhan allah
jaun elia ka andaaz sab se hi alag hai… kabhi kabhi bht saadgi se bt ba’maani baat kr jtay hin… jese… “Bht nazdeek aat ja rahi ho…. Bichadny ka irada kr liya kiya?”
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ZIA ZAIDI.UK.
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rah ki gard bhi khanjar ke qabile ki he kya.
chen lene nahi deti hen safar men yaden.
WAFA NAQVI ALIGAHR U.P.INDIA.
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